I'm thrilled to have C. Lee Mckenzie here as my guest today. She's going to share four things she's feels are necessary for those terrific books she writes. Don't forget to stop by her blog, TheWriteGame where you'll always find an interesting post and follow her on Twitter
Since
I started writing, I’ve collected a few “Must Do’s from the Get-Go.” Here’s some I have on my list:
1)
My first scene must pull my reader into the story.
I
think I started three stories with people traveling to a destination, staring
into a mirror, studying. Why? Who knows? But now I really try to have them at
their destinations, already in trouble or about to be in trouble. They never
stare into the mirror. :-(
2)
At the start I must create questions the reader wants answered.
This
is my favorite first line, but I haven’t
written the story for it yet.
“The first thing she did was hide the
knife.”
Like
it?
3)
Right away, the reader has to know a lot about my MC, and want to know more. In
Sudden Secrets here’s one place I tried to give the reader
some insight into my MC’s problem.
“Mom was desperate to move. I was
desperate to move, too, but not here. All I saw was a spooky, dangerous place.”
4)
The last line of chapter one must pull the reader into chapter two.
Here’s the one from Sudden Secrets.
“As we pulled away, I glanced out. A
shadow flickered across the upstairs window of the vacant house. It was only a
split second, but somebody moved inside that place. I was sure of it.
Those are my most important Must Do’s. What are yours? I always like
adding to my list.
Sudden Secrets
Cleo
has struggled to heal after her baby sister’s
death, but the flashbacks to the accident won’t go away. With the move, she vows to
keep her tragedy a secret and avoid pitying looks.
one
Mystery
Something’s
strange about the abandoned house across the street—flashes
of light late at night and small flickers of movement that only someone looking
for them would see.
Everyone says the house is deserted,
but Cleo is sure it isn’t, and she’s
sure whoever is inside is watching her.
another
Secret
In one night, Belleza’s
life changes forever. So famous, her only choice is to hide her secret from the
world so she can silence small town bigotry.
Then Cleo happens.
Thanks for visiting, Lee. What do you think of her list? What would you add? Don't you love that name, Belleza?
12 comments:
Pulling people into the next chapter is something I'm still working on.
Thanks for stopping by, Lee, and for the great advice.
Great must do list. Seriously speaking, I am learning some ways to venture into writing a book that is captivating and enjoyable to the readers. Thanks for the post. It was informative.
Great tips indeed, the knife would keep one intrigued for sure
Excellent tips. And I really love that first line with the knife. It hooked me.
Ah, yes. Hooks. You got to get them right into the chapter and leave the chapter with them wanting more. Good points.
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My editor told me about pulling reader into next chapter. Apparently I ended a chapter with a character nodding off to sleep. LOL won't do that again. Great list
Oh yes I like it!! That first line would keep me reading for several pages.
Some great tips. Thank you!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Lee!
Ooh, this sounds spooky and interesting - and I concur with Lee's to-do list :)
Very good list! Thanks for sharing with us. And I love the name!
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