Showing posts with label one sentence pitch. Show all posts
Showing posts with label one sentence pitch. Show all posts

Thursday, April 14, 2011

L: Loglines

Loglines, or one sentence pitches, are a challenge to write.  How can you sum up a four hundred page novel in one sentence? How can you write one sentence and show off your unique voice?  How can you sell your block-buster plot in one sentence?

I don't have a magic formula but I do have some suggestions that have helped me.  These are not guidelines I've come up with on my own, but a compendium of articles, classes and advice I've picked up from many different sources.

What kind of things need to be in that sentence?  Start with the inciting incident which is likely your opening conflict in your story, add the obstacle, the main character and the quest.   Some people call those the 'who, what, where and why should I care?' 

Be prepared to write and rewrite your sentence.  Sometimes I start with two or three sentences to get all the things listed above included.  Then I pare a word here, change a verb there, cut out anything I can and try to make those multiple sentences into one clear one.  Don't be vague or coy.  Make each word count and try to showcase your voice.

I like to come up with three or four versions of my one-liners and then combine them or settle on one I really like.  If you're going to pitch to an agent or editor at a conference, work out your logline before you go.  They will ask you what your book is about and you should be able to tell them in a concise powerful sentence.  This also helps if you bump into an agent or editor at the bar or in the elevator.  Be ready.

What advice would you give to someone trying to create their first logline? Where do authors use one-liners?

Sunday, January 30, 2011

One Sentence Pitch

I saw some advice on line earlier this week from an agent who said your query letter should be a pitch not a plot summary.  In my spare moments during this busy week, I've been rewriting (dozens of time) my one sentence pitch.  I'm going to bravely throw it out there for critiques.  I'm pretty sure no one who visits my blog has read this book, First Dragon, so this single sentence will give you the feel for the book or not. 

Men born with dragon-blood ignite a war that could end civilization and the only hope of the free people of Morbunda rests with a young man who must accept his role as a true dragon and a young woman who learns she can call the wind.


I've been on crutches for three weeks and through four snow storms.  I'm tough.  I can take it.  What do you think of my pitch?  What do you think about one-sentence pitches in general?  Now that I remembered to include it!!!